Charles Belangerie

[ooc:This is my second character]

Name: Charles Germain Belangerie

Age: 54

Affiliations: Assassins

Appearance:

This is just his outfit. He is 6´1, has long black hair tied up, a scar that runs diagonally through his face. He has big hands and he has a metal device on his leg that helps him to walk.

Personality: He is very kind with his family and friends. He looks very grumpy, but he is a great person when you get to meet him. He has helped the homeless and has fought for justice way before joining the assassins.

Favourite Weapons: Hidden/Phantom Blade, musket, and the guillotine cannon.

Strenghts: He is a very skilled asssassin, he knows every tactics that the french assassins had done during their existense. He is a great teacher and can make war winning strategies.

Weaknesess: He cant free run like before. He is constantly in pain, and he has not got any mission since the accident, so his skills may be a little rusty.

Backround:
Charles is a beloved husband and father. He belongs to a long chain of Assassins from him family. All of them have been devoted to find the Sword of Eden. this lineage started with Piere Belangerie,his obsession with the Sword of Eden led him to the Assassin Order. Charles met her wife, Merie Court, in a mission. They both were assigned for an assassination.The mission failed, but they fell in love at first sight. A few months after their wedding, he embarked on a mission to take the sword of eden from the hands of an unknown templar. He only remebers that a lighting stroke him in the face, giving him the scar. When he was free running through the city, a tile broke and made him to fell down and break his leg. He can still walk and battle, but cannot free run like before.

Apologies, I'd been meaning to get to Charles sooner. I'd say you should modify your strengths and weaknesses just a bit. You say he's "a very skilled assassin" which is very vague and all-encompassing, so find an element that is more specific (this doesn't mean he isn't decent at most assassin skills, just that there's one area in particular he excels in). Being a good mentor and strategist is good. Maybe add one or two (at least one) weaknesses as well, consider something that's perhaps more psychological and deals with his personality or mentality. Other than that you might consider adding a bit more meat to the bio, going into things that may or may not include: a bit of history of his family line (seeing as how they've been assassins for so long), the details of how he met his wife, the mission to retrieve the sword and how he survived, etc. You by no means have to include or do all of this, just suggestions. Make a couple changes and you should be good to go. Nice pic by the way

Done.

How about now?

It's good, go forth and role-play sir. APPROUVÉ