Hans Buckholtz

Name: Hans Hummel Ingersleben Buckholtz

Age: 40

Affiliation: Assassin

Appearance: Same as avatar.

Personality: A quiet man, Hans doesn't worry about a thing, only accomplishing the Order's missions and contracts.

Favorite Weapons: Hidden Blade, Flintlock Pistol.

Strengths:

- Even among the Assassins, Hans has advanced parkour skills, climbing buildings and running away easily and quickly;

- Misdirection: a technique which diverts the opponents gaze, allowing it's user to disappear out of sight. Misdirection cannot be used by everyone. The users of this technique have to have a weak presence as well as a strong will. They cannot be taken by their emotions or natural instincts, thus they have to have total control of their minds and actions in order to stay in the shadows;

- Hans has a great visual perception, allowing him to identify emotions such as stress, anxiety, sadness, etc, and to find and identify people on a crowd, for example.

Weaknesses:

- He isn't a very good person to be with, since he is phlegmatic and seems not to care about anything and anyone, hardly ever opening his mouth to opine, give a suggestion or complaining;

- In order to raise his agility and climbing skills, he is a weak man, in terms of muscles;

- He follows the Order rules so sharply that he would do anything to comply with them.

Background/Biography: Hans Buckholtz was born in Frankfurt, Germany. Due to Order's stuff and business, his parents moved to England, when he was seven, and they lived there for six years, until the day Hans's father was found dead in the living room, and his mother runned away. He was thirteen then, and was raised and trained in the path of an Assassin by another member of the Order. He investigated his parents death and discovered that his mother and the murderes were in America. He is now there, trying to reach his own revenge.

A'ight, you look like you have a fairly good idea of things apart from a few blaring issues. First off: you say that Hans' only concern is "accomplishing the Order's mission and contracts" but then go on to contradict this by saying he goes to America on a personal vendetta to find his mother and father's murderers. Might want to straighten that out. Second: exercising, climbing, and parkour does not result in being less fit and having less muscle. It would just result in him being slimmer but still having muscle and being fit - not really a weakness.

Apart from those two things, all I would suggest adding is some more detail to his Bio regarding how his parents were connected to the Order, why the had to move, who trained him, and the years leading up to now accounting his service to the Order and any important events that may have occurred during that time.

Hope to see you RP-ing in the near future. Cheers amigo.

Approved, But i suggest you sort out the whole "Only cares about the order" but has a personal vendetta? doesn't really make sense xD