Dilan (Nal) Magnus

Name: Dilan (Nal) Magnus

Age: 17

Affiliation: Assassin

Appearance:  He's 5'5" in height and is somewhat thin with tan-ish skin. He has short black hair and dark brown eyes. He usually wears black T-Shirts with logos. When he has assassination business he wears a black sweater, a black jacket with dark grey lines on the hood and the sleeves and the assassin's emblen as a necklace and black fingerless gloves.

Personality:
Dilan can be very awkward around people so he preffers to spend time with his books, comics and his computer. When he gets comfortable with someone or he encounters someone he dislikes he can be very sarcastic and a bit of a smartass. Other than that, he's usualy lost in thought while reading or listening to music.

Favorite Weapons: Twin katanas, smoke-screen bombs, throwing knives, hiden blade.

Strengths: He's flexible, can be very quiet when he wants, he comes up with strategies easily and he's very calculative.

Weaknesses: His sarcasm can get him into trouble, he can be dangerous when somebody really angers him, he can run fast but not for long because his legs give out quickly. Also, he can get distracted easily.

Background/Biography: His father was an Assassin and his mother was a an Templar who was sent to kill his father. They fell in love and his mother left the templars to live with Dilan's father but some years later, when Dilan was 15, the Templars decided that Dilan's parents were becoming 'troublesome' and had them eliminated. Dilan swore to take revenge.

Ok, everything else looks good, but the background/bio looks a bit sparce.

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I'm not that good with backgrounds/bios but I can try to think of something better

Background/Biography: Dilan's father was a known assassin who teh templars wanted to get rid of so they sent Dilan's mother to kiss him. During one of the murder attempts, they were both captured by a gang after having tired each other out. They had to work together to escape successfuly and, after that, their encounters started becoming less and less bloody and deadly. After a while, realising they had started to develop feleing for each other, they gave up the whole assassins / templars thing and got married. Thus, Dilan was born. Some years later, when Dilan was 14, an Assassin gave Dilan's father an artifact to look after so that the Templars wouldn't get their hands on it. The Templars found out and killed Dilan's parents but, before managing to find teh artifact, Dilan took it and ran away, swearing to take revenge on his parents' murderers.

Okay. Looks good now. Just keep an eye on your spelling.

Approved.

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