Thomas Hergenston

Name: Thomas Hergenston
Age: 26
Affiliation: Assassins, Pirate
Appearance: Scar on his left cheek (From a battle with the Spanish navy) Thomas has neatly kept black hair that flows just past his ears, 6"0. He wears peach, coloured robes with plenty of black on them.
Personality: calm, witty, good leader, well educated, master marksman, trustworthy, wise mouth
Positive attributes: witty, light hearted, muscular, great captain, strong leader.
Negative attributes: Tempered, Sometimes his mouth causes trouble, sloppy fighter, not very passionate.

Weapons: Scottish cutlass, dual golden flintlock pistols, rope dart, hidden blades, smoke bomb, berserk bomb.

Back story: Thomas was born into a family of fisherman. He wasn't the wealthiest kid in his small, port town of Scotland, but he never felt isolated from others. Thomas' mother died when he was seven. And his father was forced into depression. "What's the problem, father?" Thomas would ask when aboard the ship his father called "The Eve." His father wouldn't reply and could only mourn. The one day Thomas saw his father smile was when he overheard him speaking to a tall man in a large coat, the only words Thomas could make out were, "Kingstown needs you." When Thomas was thirteen he and his father sailed to The West Indies, Thomas was still unsure of why his father wanted to come here but when he asked the only answer he recieved was, "there are many exotic marine life." His father was known to be a good liar and the young pubescent teen knew there was more to the story.
    On Thomas' seventeenth birthday he was given his father's ship. Thomas knew something was up and seven months later Thomas' father was killed. There was no body at the scene of the crime, there was only one thing, a dagger with a cross on it. When Thomas turned twenty he became a pirate, his crew was large (18 to be exact) and Thomas was driven to find his father's killers, while trying to survive in the harshe world that outcasted him. Thomas became an assassin at twenty-three and kept plundering ships for his own sake. And so he is drawn into the centuries-old battle between the Assassins and the Templars.

(A few more key details) height: 6"1
Eye colour: blue
Weapons: hidden blades, Scottish-made rapier, dual flintlock pistols, smoke bombs, rope dart.

Please use the official template/layout, and maybe consider editing the initial application. Also what type of ship is the Eve?
(Sorry if I came across as mean, rude, or insensitive, I don't mean to.)

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"The Eve" is a brig. I thought the way I presented my character without giving too much info, was good? No?

Can I start?

You have to fill out an offical template.
Here's the template you would fill out in order to submit your character. Please do follow the template; it is easier for everyone to keep up with the characters that way.

Name:

Age:

Affiliation: (Assassin, Templar, Free Agent)

Appearance: (Description, or picture, or both)

Personality:

Favorite Weapons:

Strengths: At least 3

Weaknesses: Both physical and psychological (ex: easily aggravated as a psychological trait)

Background/Biography:

There, I edited it. Is that better?

Looks good Just remember to use that template in future. It makes it REALLY hard if everyone goes with their own design

Okay, thank you. I'm really excited to get started.