Thelonewolf54 Frequent Flyer
Posts : 30 Join date : 2014-12-18
| Subject: Giovanni Agiotto Da Venezia Sat Dec 20, 2014 12:41 pm | |
| Name: Giovanni Agiotto Da Venezia
Age: 40
Affiliation: Assassin.
Appearance: Short brown hair with a few grey streaks , green eyes, lean, rough stubble, 5 foot 11 inches, thin scar from neck to torso. Wears grey Assassin's robes with white edges.
Personality: Clam and collected, Giovanni imposes a fatherly character to younger assassins and sometimes intimidating to hostiles. Usually silent, a lengthy conversation is usually rare to him. Ignorance and easily avoidable mistakes infuriate him.
Favorite weapons: . Italian Rapier . Stiletto . Hidden Blade
Strengths: Studied with fencing master, which makes him skillful with the rapier and stiletto, which is usually used together. Calmness is usually intimidating to some. Respect by younger assassins as a father figure.
Weaknesses: -Older age slows his movements, which gives a combat disadvantage. -Hesitant, he studies every possible action before making a move.
Biography: Born a son of a wealthy Venetian trader, he had a more privileged way of life. His father, Leonardo Agiotto, was a supplier to the Assassin Brotherhood and was very impressed by their ways. Unbeknownst to Giovanni, his father began preparing him for his life as an assassin. At 14, his father enlisted a French fencing master, Claude De Clament, to teach him the art of sword fighting, which has been grueling and hard for Giovanni, he usually returned home covered in bruises and scratches. At 18, he was taken in by the Assassins to start his official training as an assassin. But as he was about to complete his apprenticeship, his father was killed by Templars after they found out his ties with the brotherhood. In a blind fit of rage, he attacked whom he thought was responsible, who turned to be an assassin spying on Templars. breaking one of the 3 tenants, he had to repeat his training. Although humiliated and ashamed, he did not turn against the brotherhood, rather he thought that it was proper chastising. After finally graduating as an assassin, he completed missions in Rome And Florence, finally placed permanently in Rome. In Roma, Giovanni met Niccollo Machievelli, another assassin, to learn more about the Borgias, the Notorious family leading the Templar order. Recklessly, he tried to attack to papal residence alone, which ended up to be a gruesome defeat, and received a scar from neck to torso as a lesson.Due to the scar, he was inactive for a few months. Finally returning to duty, he found his father's killer, Francesco Vietta, a hired killer and mercenary that was hired by the Templars. Finally receiving revenge, Giovanni's angry feelings that occupied him left him. Slowly, he evolved into a calmer, wiser character, respected by the younger and older assassins alike. Now, being the oldest assassin on the field, he is turned to by younger assassins because of his experience and wise character. Giovanni's love life was complicated, after his childhood friend and lover, named, Isabella Fiorti, died from the plague, he vowed to never love again, but that vow was broken more than once, many lovers shared his bed for half a night, or half a year, but in his older years, no one is waiting for him in bed, for he devoted hi brotherhood, and took a vow of chastity, but, that vow can be broken, too. ( sorry about the screwed up page, I was typing in phone and I messed up somewhere)( reason for editing: minor "tweaks" and correcting some mistakes.).
Last edited by Thelonewolf54 on Sun Dec 21, 2014 1:31 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixing errors, making app more user friendly Reason No.2 for editing: a few additions to the bio.) | |
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Clayst Admin
Posts : 427 Join date : 2013-12-29 Age : 25 Location : New Zealand
| Subject: Re: Giovanni Agiotto Da Venezia Sat Dec 20, 2014 3:31 pm | |
| Looks ok to me, a bit skinny. I'll get Jas to check it out seeing he's the moderator for CharactersApplications.
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Jas Trusted
Posts : 129 Join date : 2014-10-27 Age : 27 Location : Toronto, Canada
| Subject: Re: Giovanni Agiotto Da Venezia Sat Dec 20, 2014 6:07 pm | |
| If you're going to make a character who is older, wiser, and commands the respect of his peers, you're going to have to have a longer bio, something that reflects the things he's been through, the hardships he's had to endure, and the friends and foes he has made and no doubt lost along the way. If this inspires you to add anything more to his personality, strengths & weaknesses, etc., feel free to do so. | |
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