Herrin Blut

Name: Herrin Blut (English- Mistress Blood)

Age: 32

Affiliation: Free agent

Appearance: A slender body, D cup breasts, pale skin, black lipstick and eye shadow, A long black dress slit up to her left thigh, black veil, black hair, and a black umbrella.

Personality: Sexually strong, Spoiled rotten. and very romantic.

Favorite Weapons: Her umbrella that has two buttons on the handle, one turns her umbrella into a flintlock while the other extends a blade from the tip.

Strengths: A skilled assassin, a master manipulator, Is the best interrogator in all of the Holy Roman Empire

Weaknesses: Is not at all strong, easily aggravated, has a hard time fighting other women.

Background/Biography: The Blut family is the most influential and the richest family in all the Holy Roman Empire built on a massive empire of Brothels and Taverns. Born June 25th 1459, Elsa Blut, Daughter of Hannes Blut and Ricarda Blut was a bright young woman with a taste for money. Her family owned every brothel in the Empire, however Elsa wanted more, she wanted to be the richest woman in all the Empire so when she was 17 she recived training in assassin arts and combat from an assassin named Dame Klinge who used her body to distract a target. and by the time she was 18 Elsa took on the Alias Herrin Blut otherwise named "Mistress Blood" however a dagger is not her style so she created a Umbrella after a year of tampering with a flintlock and a blade. She became one of the deadliest assassin's in the German Countries so much so that the Assassin's and Templars approached her asking for her help however she declined both of them in order to continue business. At the age of 26 her parents died leaving the entire company to her. and at the age of 30 she lived in the Pleasure Palace of Berlin which was a city state at that time which she owned 75% of.

You're lacking a lot in background and history there. How did the Blut become the richest family in the HRE and how did she rise to the top? It would have been especially difficult back then for a woman to rise to such a position of power, so be specific. What was her life like growing up? How did she become so manipulative? Why would she need to use assassination skills and how did she develop those skills? That umbrella - if you're going to have something remotely like that in a historical RP you're going to have to explain how she got, where the technology came from, etc.

Of course, I'm not an admin so you can completely disregard all of that. But Herrin seems like an interesting character, and fleshing out characters and providing as much detail as we can is what makes them all the more fun to play! Perhaps I'll make a Renaissance character myself and RP with ya.

Thank you

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